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Yoshihiro Hattori knocked on the wrong door.

Yoshihiro Hattori knocked on the wrong door.

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Jan 01, 2013
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A friend took this photo of Yoshihiro Hattori in San Francisco. In October 1992, Yoshihiro Hattori knocked on the wrong door. Yoshi, as he was known, was a 16-year-old Japanese exchange student on his way to a Halloween party in Baton Rouge, Louisiana. https://www.bbc.com/news/world-us-canada-50063364

This play references the fatal shooting of Japanese exchange student Yoshihiro Hattori in 1992, one of the first “stand your ground” gun shootings in which the homeowner/shooter was acquitted.

TRICK OR TREAT BY PHILIP ZWERLING 34THPARALLEL MAGAZINE ISSUE 21

A home in New Orleans. The at-home office/writing space of NED ATKISSON, 35 years old. A desk and chair are stage right. On the desk is a typewriter and lock box. Ned is sitting at the desk typing. He types a bit, reads what he typed, and then, in disgust, removes the paper from the typewriter, crumples it up, and tosses it on the floor. He repeats this action several times with mounting frustration.

NED

She said: “Rod, come quick. Bring the gun!” and he did. Christ!

(tosses paper)

“In Japan, most people have never even seen a gun except on TV.” Shit!

(Tosses paper. He unlocks the box on the desk and removes a gun. He examines it for several moments.)

CHERYL

(Ned’s wife, Cheryl, also 35 years old, is heard offstage.)

When are you coming to bed, honey?

NED

(He jumps at the unexpected sound and then quickly returns the gun to its box but does not lock the box.)

When I learn to fucking write!

(He tosses another paper on the floor after reading it.)

CHERYL

(She walks into the office in pajamas.)

C’mon, baby it’s past midnight.

NED

(hardly looking at her)

You go to sleep, honey, I’m going to get this right or...kill myself trying.

(She approaches him and kisses him. He responds at first reluctantly and then with enthusiasm as they embrace. Suddenly he pulls himself away.)

Oh, no you don’t! I know your game.

CHERYL

What do you mean?

NED

You’re just trying to make me feel better.

CHERYL

And what’s wrong with that?

(She starts to seductively play with his shirt buttons)

NED

Cut it out! I’m warning you...if you seduce me, get me into the bedroom...

CHERYL

Yes?

NED

...And drive me wild with desire!

CHERYL

Yes?

NED

...And make me forget about this play...

CHERYL

...Yes?

NED

...I’ll hate you...in the morning.

CHERYL

Well then finish this up with some dispatch because my bed has been a lonely place these last few nights.

NED

(he kisses her)

I’m sorry...it just isn’t coming.

CHERYL

Well, neither am I.

NED

Very funny... Mike’s been bugging me for this script for months now.

CHERYL

So? Let the old slave-driver wait a little longer.

NED

I can’t.

CHERYL

Why not?

NED

I told him I’d have it tomorrow...and missing another deadline is a good way to lose an agent.

CHERYL

It took you years to get an agent.

NED

Tell me about it. It’s back to unpublishedville for me.

CHERYL

Alright, don’t panic. What have you got so far?

NED

Lots...

(He throws away more pages which he had by the side of the typewriter.)

...and lots...of crap.

CHERYL

I’ve got it...let me help you?

(he looks incredulous)

Really. My women’s magazine said that for a husband and wife shared tasks can be a kind of foreplay.

NED

Believe me this is not turning me on.

CHERYL

Well, what’s the problem?

NED

I’ll work it out...just leave me alone.

CHERYL

Come on...I’ve never seen you sweat a project like this one.

NED

I just can’t get them.

CHERYL

Who?

NED

These people...the characters.

CHERYL

Well then, why don’t you just change them?

NED

Not so easy. This one is a real story, These are real people. I don’t want to change them, I just want to get inside them. I want to show what makes them tick...why they did what they did.

CHERYL

That’s a tough one. Who knows why anyone does anything?

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